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Say It With a Poem -
A Gift That Lasts Forever
When you have struggled for the words
To tell someone what's in your heart.
When you have given up the task,
And stroll behind a shopping cart.
When you search for a lesser gift,
And hope it shows the love you feel.
You tell yourself it's still the thought,
And dicker for a better deal.
When you gift wrap that piece of cloth,
Or drop it in a fancy bag,
And wonder why you're feeling low,
And why your spirits start to sag.
It's time to come to me instead.
I'll craft for you a work of art,
With all the passion from your soul.
With all the love that's in your heart.
If you want to give a special gift
that truly expresses your feelings, a present picked up at
some boutique or gift shop just isn't enough.
Let me create a poem that
says what is truly in your heart. It is a gift that
will be treasured forever.
Every poem I write is completely fresh and unique because I start with
a blank page, and all your memories and descriptions
that you shared to help create the poem.
Whether you are looking for a
love poem,
wedding poem, or
a poem for any other occasion, I will work with you until you are
completely delighted with the result.
From: Sue Brandtjen
Subject: Re: first draft
Date: Wed, 18 Jan 2012 17:02:23 -0600
Thank you! I truly love the poem. It shared the message of laughter as
well as showed the love I feel for her. The end brought tears to my eyes. I do
not think anything needs to be changed.
Thanks,
Sue
From Lynn E.
Subject: Re: first draft
Date: Thu, 15 Sep 2011 08:30:41 -0500
Hey you Mister!!!!!!! You are TOO awesome!!!!!!!!!!! Perfect !!!!!
I gotta love ya! I read as you suggested and the
second time, it put me with him in all the special moments!!!
THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!!
Lynn
From: Minnie Orno
Subject: Re: second draft
Date: Sat, 3 Oct 2009 02:23:45 -0500
Oh yes, Rudy, I just loved your poem! Everything in it really
fits, and endearingly funny. I'll definitely be referring
back to you again on future events, and recommend you to
everyone I know. Thank you, thank you thank you! -Minnie
Subject: Re: poem for Caleb
Date: Sun, 14 Sep 2008 21:12:46 -0500
Oh my gosh- I love it! I appreciate you-
Caleb is in Okinawa Japan. We are doing our best to plan this wedding with
his input half way around the world.
I want you to know that you responding back to me so very quicly & with a
great poem made my day yesterday!
Thanks Rudy
Karen
Date: Mon, 21 Jul 2008 17:39:14 -0700 (PDT)
From: Adam Kugel
Subject: I love it
Hey Rudy
I absolutely love it. Its perfect. Its not too
loud if you know what I mean. And yet its very sincere.
I can't wait = to hear from her when she gets it. She=
is going to love it.
Adam
From: Cindy McCoy xxxxxxxxx
Subject: Re: draft 3
Date: Wed, 23 Apr 2008 16:48:36 -0400
It is actually perfect. I couldn't think of anything else more
suiting to explain how I feel about him. I read it to my friends at
lunch and they actually had tears. He will be totally surprised with
this poem and the cd I have being made. Thank you for all your time
and energy in writing a poem for my very special day. If there is a
page to write reviews, please let me know.
Cindy
Subject: RE: second draft
Date: Fri, 4 Aug 2006 16:19:08 -0500
From: "Enriquez, Tory" <Tory.Enriquez@xxxxx.net>
To: "Rudy Vener" <xxx@occasionalpoems.com>
I LOVE IT! Thank you Rudy! Just what I wanted!
"everything flows just absolutely perfectly!! Rudy it's really really REALLY
fab - thank you so very much... I can't wait to get them printed up.
I'll scan one and send you a copy so you can see the finished product!
You are so great - thanks again,
Kindest regards."
-- Teresa Marriott, San Diego, CA, May 4 2006
To: "Rudy Vener" <xxx@occasionalpoems.com>
Subject: Re: fifth draft
From: "Tyler" <xxxxxx@mycingular.blackberry.net>
Date: Sat, 11 Mar 2006 21:01:44 +0000 GMT
Perfect! Your amazing, thank you so much! This is going to make a begining to
the rest of my life and I owe it all to u. Thanks again, you are truly gifted.
From: "Sally XXX" <xxx@hotmail.com>
To: xxx@occasionalpoems.com
Subject: RE: first draft of the poem
Date: Mon, 20 Feb 2006 14:05:11 -0500
Rudy -
Just perfect. No changes needed. Thanks for being so prompt. I'm sure
Sara and Chase will just love it.
Sally
From: xxxx@aol.com
Date: Sun, 22 Jan 2006 08:08:43 -0500
Subject: Re: slight tweaking of draft 3
To: xxx@occasionalpoems.com
Perfect! Thank you so much for all your hard work and dedication. You will
definitely be hearing from me again in the future.
Regards,
~Jill Mazor
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My Dog Will Live Forever
My dog will live forever,
In the shadow of my eye.
He runs beside me in my dreams,
Beneath a cloudless sky.
He waters every lamp pole,
And sniffs at every tree.
His legs move with swift sureness,
His limp, a memory.
My dog will live forever
Where thoughts do not quite meet.
I grab his leash from off the knob
When heading to the street.
for just a moment, by my side
I feel he must still stand
Until I hang the leash back up,
So empty in my hand.
My dog will live forever,
Secure inside my head.
Each night when I'm half sleeping,
He rests beside my bed.
Each morning I reach over,
My fingers brush the air.
And though I cannot touch him,
For me, he's always there.
In memory of my guide dog, Doug, partner and friend
from November 1998 until his death in July, 2010.
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